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ReplyDeleteI like your speech. Your speech is enthusiastic, and you dress well. During your speech, I observed that you used rhetorical techniques such as questions and examples. This makes your speech more contagious. It is easier to make people feel substituted by citing examples from life, which will greatly help you to apply for angel investment.
Hey Cade! This was was a really good elevator pitch. I liked how you started off with a story that was relatable to me because it drew me in to hearing what solution you had to this dilemma. I thought that you explained your product very well and enthusiastically. If there was a one time fee to purchase the app and no transaction fee I think this would be a revolutionary product in mobile monetary transactions. Great post!
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