17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
1) Here is the link to my second elevator pitch for BeyondKash: https://youtu.be/pfye101Eo_I
2) While reviewing the comments from my first elevator pitch for BeyondKash, both students only critiqued my pitch in a positive way. I received good feedback about my rhetorical techniques, which I used to draw in the listener and relating a familiar issue to them. Another area where I received positive feedback was how I came across with my communication and how I was very enthusiastic when trying to convince the viewer. Although reassuring, I had very little insight into what areas of my pitch or script could be improved, even if minimal.
3) Based on my feedback, I tried to improve any video quality, pronunciations, eye contact or hand gestures to intrigue the viewer to clearly listen to what I'm saying and also to get them to invest. Also, I updated a few areas of my script to include a more aspects in why my company differs from the current competitors applications available right now, and why to invest in me.
Hey Cade, I actually read your reflection based on your feedback from the first elevator pitch, and it definitely seems like you did a stellar job on fixing the things you wanted to improve on in the second elevator pitch. From start to the end, you had good energy, great tone of voice, and good eye contact. Overall, I thought you did an awesome job on this elevator pitch.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to not specify, I read your reflection first before watching your video.
DeleteHi Cade!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job with the elevator pitch. I like the way you explained the product and how it’s going to serve its customers. I also like how you mentioned how it is better than the competitors. As for the feedback, I think you definitely had some good takeaways from your last video, and you were able to really improve. Great post!